T1+Instruct

__**Tuesday 1****5 February** __

LI: We are learning to write a set of instructions using the correct structure and explicit language to guide the reader.

Success Criteria: We will have • organised and sequenced our ideas. • used ordering devices like numbers or bullet points • used a variety of linking and sequence words e.g., first, next, after, then, before, when Used direct/explicit language to guide the reader e.g. Hold flax tightly between thumb and forefingers, with thumbs facing towards body. • used sectioning or paragraphing where it suits the writing • written sentences correctly i.e., caps, full stops, question mark, exclamation

=**//How to brush your teeth //**=

__Materials__

*toothbrush *toothpaste *water/tap *sink

__method__


 * 1) get your tooth brush
 * 2) put toothpaste on the bristles of the toothbrush (just a small bit)
 * 3) get the toothbrush and run in under cold water for 10 seconds
 * 4) brush you top teeth all the way round
 * 5) brush you bottom teeth all the way round
 * 6) brush your gums and tounge
 * 7) spit out the toothpaste in the sink
 * 8) <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px;">run your toothbrush under water
 * 9) <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px;">put your brush back where you found it.

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<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">__Tuesday 17 February__ <span style="color: #ff0000; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;"> <span style="color: #ff0000; font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;"> LI: We are learning to write a set of instructions using the correct structure and explicit language to guide the reader. <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">

//**<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">How to brush your teeth **//
<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">__Materials__

<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">*toothbrush <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">*toothpaste <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">*water/tap <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">*sink

<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">__method__


 * 1) <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;">get your tooth brush
 * 2) <span style="font-family: Helvetica,helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;">Run it under cold water for 3 sconds
 * 3) <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;">put toothpaste on the bristles of the toothbrush (just a pea size bit)
 * 4) <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;">brush you top teeth all the way round in a curricular motion.
 * 5) <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;">brush you bottom teeth all the way round in a curricular motion.
 * 6) <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;">brush your gums and tounge.
 * 7) <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;">spit out the toothpaste in the sink.
 * 8) <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;">run your toothbrush under water.
 * 9) <span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;">put your brush back where you found it.
 * 10) <span style="font-family: Helvetica,helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;">wash your mouth out with a cup of water.
 * 11) <span style="font-family: Helvetica,helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; margin-bottom: 0px; margin-left: 0px; margin-right: 0px; margin-top: 0.5em; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 3em; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 0px;">wash your face with water and dry it.

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__<span style="font: normal normal normal 12px/normal Helvetica; letter-spacing: 0px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">**Thursday 24 February** __

This was a difficult task to write instructions for. You have used some excellent action verbs e.g. turn, fold, strip. I can also see that you have tried to be explicit with your description e.g. 90 degrees.